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#Editors, Readers and Critics

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Earlier this week in this space I contributed to the Internet shredding of a thieving editor (see below) so it’s time to balance things out with a happy story. 

About My EditorLast night someone asked me what my relationship with my magazine editor is like. 

The short answer is, “Terrific.” The long answer is that we joke around. A lot. We have a lot of fun and have rarely disagreed. We are reasonable people. We’ve never met in person though we plan to some day (and almost made that work this summer.) We talk about projects on the phone on occasion, but mostly we email back and forth. We’re both incredibly busy people, so emails allow me to say something funny without intruding too much on her crazy schedule.

Of course, we have disagreed. Most of the time (98 percent of the time, not 51 percent) I figure out immediately or soon after that she was right. She’s held me back from saying a few things that, on sober second thought, were kind of out there. When I’ve stuck to my guns and presented a cogent argument, she has capitulated. A good editor is always trying to make the writing better (and occasionally has to protect the writer from himself.) As with dealing with any great person, when we’re finished talking or writing back and forth, I feel valued.

About My Readers:

I have two beta readers. The first is my wife. She has graded so many students during her time in academia, she’s the one with a sharp eye for my typos (many) and my obfuscations (less of those, I hope. Maybe. I dunno…) She’ll notice a construction that seems awkward, but she’s gentle about it.

The second reader is my oldest friend. He used to work in publishing and has edited a literary journal. Best of all, he’s a writer at heart. He is invaluable for broader editorial suggestions when my idea is almost there but not quite at the destination at which it will finally arrive in the last draft. He can be my biggest fan and, depending on his mood and my subject, my harshest critic.

When I wrote a short story that included a gay protagonist in a military environment, he disagreed with my take vehemently. I ignored him on that one and I thought the story fell apart for other reasons so I never tried to publish it and it’s tucked away on a thumb drive. 

On another occasion I wrote a humour piece for a magazine. He’s funny. I’m funny. What could go wrong? He broke it down for me in detail and ended with this bon mot: “For a humour piece, it’s not all that funny.”

Thud!

I picked myself up off the floor and took another run at it, made the humour more relevant and hit the piece out of the park. I took his criticism to heart and the next draft was so very much better for it. He’s got a great perspective on publishing and I usually end up considering about 60 to 70 percent of his suggestions.

I do not send everything I write through my readers first. Most of my magazine writing is of a kind that I don’t feel I need the extra feedback and it’s all between my editor and me. (She also has a light touch on my copy and I like that she works with me and consults on every change.)

If it’s fiction—especially long fiction—it goes through my beta readers.

When I develop marketing materials or write speeches, only the principles are involved. With short pieces, it’s easier to keep a handle on what’s to be achieved, anyway. Occasionally, with proprietary information, it wouldn’t be appropriate to bring in an outside reader. Also, if you work in a variety of niches as I do, it’s not fair to your beta readers to expect them to have an opinion on something outside their interests.

About Critics:

There are the kind of critiques you ask for. You get those opinions from people you trust, the ones with whom you have a history.

There are the kind of critiques that come at you. Sometimes those criticisms are thoughtful, have substance and bring up a new angle or experience. I love it when I pose a question in a piece and people come forward with interesting ideas and possible solutions. (That’s happening now with a column I wrote. We’re getting a lot of kind letters from people anxious to share their view on a question I posed.)

Occasionally, you get somebody who seems cranky and has an axe to grind. I find this type of critic tends to have their say about what they want to say and if it seems they didn’t really read what was written…well, they didn’t. They just want to be heard and recognized. That’s okay. Everyone gets to have an opinion.

But you don’t have to take everyone’s opinion so seriously. You get to choose who matters to you most and who you’ll go back to the next time you need a fresh set of eyes on your draft.

And you as the author? You get the final say on what appears under your name.

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#Publishing Links: Bad News for Publishers

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I attended a writers’ conference where a keynote speaker criticized a former publisher. The publisher was small, and Canadian, and there had been a dispute over the author’s electronic rights (though the publisher wasn’t selling any digital versions of the author’s work anyway.) That’s when things got ugly. “Small publishers aren’t interested in selling books. They make their money with government grants.” He walked back from that statement and mentioned several small presses he revered, but he had reason for his venom. He bought the rights back at great expense so he could use them properly.

It is true that if you’re a small Canadian publisher, you’re eligible for grants. The big publishers have some margin for error in their budgets. The mid-sized publishers are walking a financial tightrope. That’s the general point of a recent Globe & Mail article on the dangers waters publishers sail. It’s worth reading when you’re trying to choose whom you should send your precious manuscript.

In other news, if you check yesterday’s comments, you’ll see Sue Kenney, author of My Camino, stopped by for a comment about how she wrote fast to fit her publisher’s schedule. (Thanks for commenting , Sue! Check out her site and her wonderful story at www.suekenney.ca.) I mentioned in my reply how many traditional publishers are losing book sales because they don’t have the electronic version available and people are looking for those titles. When you don’t find the titles you want, you buy a book that is available for your iPad.

How do I know this? Because I’ve visited this link: Lost Book Sales | Every day an author and a publisher lose a sale. These are the stories why.‏ Publishers? If you haven’t embarked on your e-book program yet, you don’t have much time left to make the switch before you are irrelevant. (Yes, JK Rowling is the exception. She’s refusing to allow Harry Potter to go digital. Good for her. However, her amazing success is atypical in the industry and shouldn’t be the basis for sales decisions about the rest of the market.)

As if that weren’t enough to make a publisher knock out a window and crawl out on a ledge, I ran across this post on the wave of piracy that’s coming to my favorite industry: Your time is up, publishers. Book piracy is about to arrive on a massive scale – Telegraph Blogs – The BFF‏.

Don’t worry though, friends!

This isn’t a wake.

It’s just a call to make the choice to adapt.

It’s a hope the industry is willing to change.

Happy Tuesday! I’m off to NanoWriMo.

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CanWrite! 2011 Conference Announcement

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In 2011, the Canadian Authors Association has announced CanWrite! 2011

will be held in Grand Bend, Ontario, May 2-8!

For more information on the conference/writer’s retreat, here’s the link.

If you’re a writer, please consider attending. I attended the CanWrite! Conference in Victoria, British Columbia last summer. I learned so much there. I took in workshops, had my eyes opened to the future of book publishing and best of all, met a lot of really cool writers. (I even got to do a live reading of one of my short stories.)

Writing is a lonely profession. It’s fun and useful to connect and recharge. This year, CanWrite will operate like a writers’ retreat so yes, you can get stuff done!

(Thanks to my friend Kim for the heads-up.)

 

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10 Lessons Learned from An Evening with Kevin Smith

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(Sorry for the late post today, folks! Up till 3 a.m. last night, head buzzing with ideas.)

Last night I spent an evening with Kevin Smith. Well, me and hundreds of others. He’s written and/or directed 10 films, authored several books and comics and rocks the mic on several podcasts from his own theatre, Smodcastle. The Q&A lasted almost four hours. When he was done, I felt like I wasn’t doing enough with my life. Not by half. Here’s a few things I learned (or was reminded):

1. Be inspiring through your actions. His prayer before each performance is, “Be honest and it will be okay.” Also, be inspired. (Kevin found inspiration in George Carlin when he was 12, hired the great comedian when he became a filmmaker and later Smith took the stage himself.)

2. Be kind and generous. Kevin has been generous, sometimes to a fault. The podcasts are free and his childhood friend, Jason Mewes, is off heroin, in part because of Kevin.

3. Be funny. Loosen up. You should probably do more weed, too. Smith didn’t start smoking pot until he was 38. (Also It’s okay to pander to the hometown crowd as long as you do so ironically.)

4. “Don’t chase the puck. Go where the puck is going to be.” (Kevin loves the Gretzkys, Walter and Wayne.) Any writer can see the application to publishing. Mr. Smith is the DIY indie flick king considering he funded his first film with a stack of credit cards. Going DIY makes sense for writers, now more than ever. See the video link just below this one for more on that.

5. Use the whole stage. Kevin Smith‘s a big guy, but he shows so much energy. He not only has stage presence, you’ll be convinced he’s thinner than you thought and glowing under the lights (like the post-mortem Yoda and Jedi, though that could have been the bright stage lights.) I’ve lost a lot of weight recently, but I think I need to live louder and larger.

6. The work you do now prepares you for the work you do later. (For example, if I hadn’t written a particular short story a couple months ago, I would have been without a paddle when I got to NaNoWriMo Creek. See the post on The Back-up Plan and the Hyponogogic State for more on that.)

7. Don’t give the critics so much credit, especially when they make you feel bad about yourself or decrease art’s productivity.

8. Develop your craft and work on your dream. Kevin’s obviously very familiar with Malcolm Gladwell‘s reportage on how it takes 10,000 hours of practice to become a master. I haven’t worked hard enough on my dream. I’ve let distractions and other missions get in the way. I can’t do that anymore.

9. Make friends. Kevin Smith is surrounded by close friends from childhood, but he’s one of those gregarious guys who connects with people easily. (I’m working on that, too. For more on that, see the post about my friend Peter, the Master of the Instant Connection.

10. Be as happy as you are smart.

That last one requires a little more discussion on my part, if only so I can make it clearer to myself. I listen to Kevin Smith at least twice a week and sometimes more depending on what podcasts he’s on. I thought I knew his voice so well, but I was unprepared for the effect of seeing him in person. I thought he’d be more cynical. Instead, we had so much fun because he had so much fun.

And here’s where the experience made me uncomfortably self-aware. I realized that I have often equated intelligence with unhappiness (and therefore happy equals dumb.) This summer I remember making a joke about hearing Journey’s Can’t Stop Believing. “For a moment,” I wrote, “I’m an optimistic idiot, too!” Okay, I still think that’s kind of funny, but the subtext is sad, isn’t it? Being and acting more positive costs nothing and would benefit me greatly.

Thanks for the reminder, sir. As a neurotic Jack Nicholson says to Helen Hunt in As Good As It Gets, “You make me want to be a better man.” He warned us not to meet our heroes, but I sure wasn’t disappointed in mine.

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Interesting Video on DIY Publishing

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DIY Publishing video: If you have a network, you don’t need publishers.

(“But we still need editors,” his self-serving voice muttered.)

About uncommon sense by Chad Lilly-fReado‏

This is inspiring. It inspires me to be one of the cool kids so I have my own network to distribute my work.

Time to step it up a notch in all our lives, yes?

Discuss freely.

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#NaNoWriMo: The Back-up Plan (& The Hypnogogic Writing Tip)

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I really struggled with my plot for NaNoWriMo. I laid down beats for one-and one-half books before I scrapped it all. It wasn’t that the ideas were bad exactly. The ideas were not ambitious enough. The stories were strong up front but I couldn’t see my enthusiasm carrying me through to the end. 

When I say “scrapping it all,” it sounds rather careless and casual. It wasn’t. With only a few days before the start, I didn’t have a story I wanted to tell. That was surprising (to me, least) because the bigger the story, the more I want an outline. Compounding my worry (and shame) was that I had already advised others that they needed an outline to increase their chance of NaNoWriMo success. I have written a couple of half-books before. Poor abandoned halflings they were. They’d been born strong and healthy but they went bad,  failed to thrive and died on the table in my surgery. Agony crushes your heart. Reaching for something that isn’t there caves your skull. Non-writers would call it self-doubt (but nevermind non-writers. I don’t understand them any better than I grok non-readers. Bunch’a freaks.)

Halloween night as little goblins and comically-short Vader imposters came to the door for cavity and diabetes inducers, I looked over my outlines. How would I make them work? Could I rig the stories so I’d have the energy to ride all the way home? No, I decided. Problems can be fixed, but a lack of enthusiasm for one whole plot and the utter lack of the second half of a book? I might wake up with a solution to those conundrums some day, but I was sure I couldn’t force a solution over a 30-day writing stretch. Not without breaking something.

Then I decided, screw it. <insert sigh of self-loathing here>  I’ll wing it.

Or…waitadamnminute…what did I say about waking up with a solution? Of course!

I let the hypnogogic state come to my rescue. The hypnogogic state is that special twilight of consciousness between sleep and waking that is rich territory for buried treasures and epiphanies. I’ve used it to resolve many issues. As I fall asleep I ask the question. As I wake, the answer comes. I’ve plotted solutions, found resolution and clarity and come up with intuitive and counter-intuitive ideas for many questions in my life and work. It didn’t fail me this time, either.

Yesterday morning I woke thinking about a short story I’d written recently. It’s an alternative future as many of my stories are. It occurred to me that I had left the end of that sad story on a somewhat comic and hopeful note for change.

The epiphany was, “That hopeful ending worked as a short story. If you trash the hero’s hopes for that resolution, it’s the end of an early chapter.” A-HA!

Few plot developments fail if the author is determined to torture the protagonist. I had created a rich world in that short story. Now that early preparation could be useful for the NaNoWriMo project. I’d use that world and link it up with the half-story I had plotted. The two stories are unrelated, but they could share that world of secret police, relentless surveillance and a theocracy run amok. 

I woke up smiling with a good beginning and a hero who was now a Cheech and Chong/Fugitive meets Mr. Spock in search of a Terminator (played by Summer Glau, not the governator.)  The first story was about the discovery and governmental repression of a miracle drug. The second was about robots reaching such complexity they are indistinguishable from humans. Now those stories will be in the same timeline. 

I’ve found my enthusiasm for the story. It will carry me to the end now.

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Monday Publishing Links

The Nighttime Novelist: Finish Your Novel in Your Spare Time‏

Guide to Literary Agents – How Writers Can Use Twitter for Networking and Success‏

Canada Reads Top 40 List of books

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Still sick. Here’s some publishing links for your Thursday.

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Kindle vs. iPad: A False Choice | Lance Ulanoff | PCMag.com‏

This Futurebook survey says publishers should set e-book pricing (even though it’s not a long term adaptive strategy!)

There Are No Rules – Best Tweets for Writers (week ending 10/22/10)‏

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Daniel Handler Interview: On Writing A Series of Unfortunate Events

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Wednesday Publishing Links

Here’s some useful links for you. I’m still under the weather. Looking forward to getting out from under gray skies. In the meantime, enjoy some publishing wisdom from these useful sites:

The Millions : The Sorry State of the Rejection Letter‏

Rachelle Gardner, Literary Agent: Utterly Original‏

How to Sell Books : Tips and Tricks: Creating a Book Marketing Plan Budget‏

10 Writers that WILL probably Haunt You « The Curse of the Drinking Class

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